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Wednesday, December 23, 2015

PD2: Aidan D- Found Poem

Aidan Donadio

Mr. Davis

English 7

22 December 2015

“Feliz Cumpleaños”

A beautiful girl
holding a bouquet of flowers

She missed me
she realized that the only thing that she ever wanted to be
was my mother

Frankie and I were her most prized possessions
we were safe
the only way that she could survive
being away from me on my fifteenth birthday

Hopefully
we would be together soon

Found poem inspired by Christina Diaz Gonzalez’s “The Red Umbrella”


Empathy can be communicated many different ways.  One way is poetry.  My poem, Feliz Cumpleaños, portrays this very well.  First, Lucia’s mother understands how she misses her and tries to soothe her.  She does this by acknowledging that she misses Lucia also, and by saying that she hopes they’ll be together soon.  Second, the letter states how she cares a lot about Lucia and how Lucia is her most prized possession.  In order to accomplish my goal of showing a lesson about empathy, I had to find the right scene.  All of my reasons above exhibit why I chose this scene.  It had all of the right elements that I needed to achieve my goal.  In conclusion,


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